two small deaths happened today
while i/all was at work
while all/i was at play
two small deaths happened today
while i/all was at work
while all/i was at play
it's difficult to be sure she's saying I... it hard not to hear as almost interchangeable...
it's difficult to be sure she's saying I... it hard not to hear as almost interchangeable...
i don't know if she's saying "a vast light darkens my door," or "all this light darkens my door." i used to think the latter, but then i read this, and now i can't be certain.
i don't know if she's saying "a vast light darkens my door," or "all this light darkens my door." i used to think the latter, but then i read this, and now i can't be certain.
where you have "forwards, always onwards," i can't hear the onwards. i hear it as "forwards, always forwards."
where you have "forwards, always onwards," i can't hear the onwards. i hear it as "forwards, always forwards."
i've...
i've no heart strong and that's life's sting
to miss and to mourn
love, wild at its path
sing
INSTEAD OF THIS, I HEAR something more like:
i've no heart strong enough i
sting to miss and to mourn
the world at its passing
i can't quite hear "slow ride, easy," but i'm not sure what she is actually saying... sounds more like "slow AND easy"... also don't know about "i'll be creeping alone now." i thought she might be saying "i'll be creeping all over"... but it's anyone's guess :)
i made some changes based on your interpretations...
i made some changes based on your interpretations...
i can't do the "i've no heart strong enough i" part. i hear a consonant in there for sure, like an "L", but what i'm thinking is that perhaps it's something like "the world at its PAS-SING" where she elongates the syllables over multiple phrases. maybe something like "i've no heart strong and it's LA-STING to miss and to mourn." thoughts?
i can't do the "i've no heart strong enough i" part. i hear a consonant in there for sure, like an "L", but what i'm thinking is that perhaps it's something like "the world at its PAS-SING" where she elongates the syllables over multiple phrases. maybe something like "i've no heart strong and it's LA-STING to miss and to mourn." thoughts?
this is my interpretation. any help is much appreciated.
again, just some possibilities...
again, just some possibilities...
two small deaths happened today while i/all was at work while all/i was at play
two small deaths happened today while i/all was at work while all/i was at play
it's difficult to be sure she's saying I... it hard not to hear as almost interchangeable...
it's difficult to be sure she's saying I... it hard not to hear as almost interchangeable...
i don't know if she's saying "a vast light darkens my door," or "all this light darkens my door." i used to think the latter, but then i read this, and now i can't be certain.
i don't know if she's saying "a vast light darkens my door," or "all this light darkens my door." i used to think the latter, but then i read this, and now i can't be certain.
where you have "forwards, always onwards," i can't hear the onwards. i hear it as "forwards, always forwards."
where you have "forwards, always onwards," i can't hear the onwards. i hear it as "forwards, always forwards."
i've...
i've no heart strong and that's life's sting to miss and to mourn love, wild at its path sing INSTEAD OF THIS, I HEAR something more like: i've no heart strong enough i sting to miss and to mourn the world at its passing
i can't quite hear "slow ride, easy," but i'm not sure what she is actually saying... sounds more like "slow AND easy"... also don't know about "i'll be creeping alone now." i thought she might be saying "i'll be creeping all over"... but it's anyone's guess :)
i made some changes based on your interpretations...
i made some changes based on your interpretations...
i can't do the "i've no heart strong enough i" part. i hear a consonant in there for sure, like an "L", but what i'm thinking is that perhaps it's something like "the world at its PAS-SING" where she elongates the syllables over multiple phrases. maybe something like "i've no heart strong and it's LA-STING to miss and to mourn." thoughts?
i can't do the "i've no heart strong enough i" part. i hear a consonant in there for sure, like an "L", but what i'm thinking is that perhaps it's something like "the world at its PAS-SING" where she elongates the syllables over multiple phrases. maybe something like "i've no heart strong and it's LA-STING to miss and to mourn." thoughts?
addendum:
addendum:
"i've no heart strong and that's LA-STING to miss and to mourn"...maybe...but probably not.
"i've no heart strong and that's LA-STING to miss and to mourn"...maybe...but probably not.
hmm, i do see what you're saying. i had to listen for it. i'm not positive, but it may very well be "lasting."
hmm, i do see what you're saying. i had to listen for it. i'm not positive, but it may very well be "lasting."