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Break it down Trace the steps moving to the gold town Lost your past from me (should be = lost your PATH from me)
Made the plans THEN backed out
...I can't feel my heart when I hurt myself I can't feel the pain when I hurt my friends But it's taking you further and further away
Take me down to the garden behind the old house, sail away with me. Break it down, trace the steps, moving to the gold town, lost your path from me.
Small corrections -
Break it down Trace the steps moving to the gold town Lost your past from me (should be = lost your PATH from me)
Made the plans THEN backed out
...I can't feel my heart when I hurt myself I can't feel the pain when I hurt my friends But it's taking you further and further away
Take me down to the garden behind the old house, sail away with me. Break it down, trace the steps, moving to the gold town, lost your path from me.