i dont think these are right
first line its " we've done our time, now i watch you sleep"
then instead of" the trigger is cold as blood" its " the trigger has called his bluff"
then its " this scene has become a masterpiece in my head" not "The sin has become a massive piece of mind"
instead of "I've ended your pain and written my own ending. " its " ive entered your pain and written my own ending"
last its " your door opens, this pain in frame has cured her illness. this sorry plea that leaves you helpless" not "Your open door (this pain will pull me through this) That leaves you helpess (this leaves you helpless)"
i dont think these are right first line its " we've done our time, now i watch you sleep"
then instead of" the trigger is cold as blood" its " the trigger has called his bluff"
then its " this scene has become a masterpiece in my head" not "The sin has become a massive piece of mind"
instead of "I've ended your pain and written my own ending. " its " ive entered your pain and written my own ending"
last its " your door opens, this pain in frame has cured her illness. this sorry plea that leaves you helpless" not "Your open door (this pain will pull me through this) That leaves you helpess (this leaves you helpless)"