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Love this song, thanks for the lyrics, my suggested corrections below:
Should be ''no money in our RUIN'' not "run".
Also think it's "next BREAK was your pretty face" but I do see "wave" posted elsewhere. I think it sounds like break and break makes more sense?
less sure about these:
"and only AFTERWARDS did we, ADORE HIM MORE AND ALL THAT MONEY" ?
"BEHIND (or BLIND?) OUR EYELID HANGS, WHILE HE CLANGS, with that black piano" ?
Also think it's ''SHARING'' this boat both times, not 'shooting' the 2nd time.
[Edit: another line fix]
Love this song, thanks for the lyrics, my suggested corrections below:
Should be ''no money in our RUIN'' not "run".
Also think it's "next BREAK was your pretty face" but I do see "wave" posted elsewhere. I think it sounds like break and break makes more sense?
less sure about these:
"and only AFTERWARDS did we, ADORE HIM MORE AND ALL THAT MONEY" ?
"BEHIND (or BLIND?) OUR EYELID HANGS, WHILE HE CLANGS, with that black piano" ?
Also think it's ''SHARING'' this boat both times, not 'shooting' the 2nd time.
[Edit: another line fix]