I think two words are deliberately swapped in a couple of lines. "Does she ever whisper in his ear, all her favorite places" makes more sense if the couple is making love (she takes off her dress, and is whispering in his ear -- her favorite places to be touched?). "And all the most exotic fruit they are cultivating" is obvious.
I don't know why CVB would do this, except just screwing around, but it makes more sense to me.
@kreniigh you could flag it for deletion, but I don't think your comment is anything that would "spark" a deletion ... is just a point of view, each to their own
@kreniigh you could flag it for deletion, but I don't think your comment is anything that would "spark" a deletion ... is just a point of view, each to their own
I think two words are deliberately swapped in a couple of lines. "Does she ever whisper in his ear, all her favorite places" makes more sense if the couple is making love (she takes off her dress, and is whispering in his ear -- her favorite places to be touched?). "And all the most exotic fruit they are cultivating" is obvious.
I don't know why CVB would do this, except just screwing around, but it makes more sense to me.
Wait, just realized it's 'cultivated'. That fits. Never mind. (now how do you delete a post here...)
Wait, just realized it's 'cultivated'. That fits. Never mind. (now how do you delete a post here...)
@kreniigh you could flag it for deletion, but I don't think your comment is anything that would "spark" a deletion ... is just a point of view, each to their own
@kreniigh you could flag it for deletion, but I don't think your comment is anything that would "spark" a deletion ... is just a point of view, each to their own