At first I had one lyric change in mind but then saw many other mistakes. Please delete my multiple posts! I can't seem to find a delete button or l procedure.
I could be wrong but there are some adjustments I'd make to the lyrics.
"Look at the names carved into rocks..."
"Brushing my head and I feel their age..."
"I'm coming home so leave the light on for me. Im drawing in on the luminous veil..."
"Somebody's sleeping that you should not wake. Drifting whispers over damp clay."
"Wide open spaces. In a sleep a long time (?) Punctuating places (?) Coming out like old teeth."
"I'm soaring in on the great exhale."
Also, the line "Certain grounds are water more likely" seems highly suspect.
At first I had one lyric change in mind but then saw many other mistakes. Please delete my multiple posts! I can't seem to find a delete button or l procedure.
I could be wrong but there are some adjustments I'd make to the lyrics.
"Look at the names carved into rocks..."
"Brushing my head and I feel their age..."
"I'm coming home so leave the light on for me. Im drawing in on the luminous veil..."
"Somebody's sleeping that you should not wake. Drifting whispers over damp clay."
"Wide open spaces. In a sleep a long time (?) Punctuating places (?) Coming out like old teeth."
"I'm soaring in on the great exhale."
Also, the line "Certain grounds are water more likely" seems highly suspect.