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A few minor corrections: -"Over look" should be "Overlook" -"but now my flesh" should be "but now might fetch" -"Devine" should be "Divine" -"I cuckold at my brother" should be "I cuckolded my brother"
Great, eerie song!
A few minor corrections: -"Over look" should be "Overlook" -"but now my flesh" should be "but now might fetch" -"Devine" should be "Divine" -"I cuckold at my brother" should be "I cuckolded my brother"
Great, eerie song!