"You hiss that this is bliss, NOT LUST" - for the rhyme with "just";
"When near MY EAR, how clear you make..."
This is, as far as I'm concerned, the most efficient job of rhyming that anybody has ever done while still making a song that makes sense and has a point. It's awe-inspiring.
Small corrections:
"You hiss that this is bliss, NOT LUST" - for the rhyme with "just";
"When near MY EAR, how clear you make..."
This is, as far as I'm concerned, the most efficient job of rhyming that anybody has ever done while still making a song that makes sense and has a point. It's awe-inspiring.