I'm a huge fan of haunting, childlike melodies, but I can't get over the ridiculous rhymes. "yap a yap yap" and "water from a tap"? Couldn't think of a different image? And the shoehorning of "edgeways" onto a line where it doesn't fit? I can't listen without making a face.
I'm a huge fan of haunting, childlike melodies, but I can't get over the ridiculous rhymes. "yap a yap yap" and "water from a tap"? Couldn't think of a different image? And the shoehorning of "edgeways" onto a line where it doesn't fit? I can't listen without making a face.