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This line is misplaced, is repeated more than once.
So forget about the days. We're almost all the way Forget about the times we were lonely. Now hold me, and you hold me.
Also is sounds like: "Forget about the times we worry...Goodbye" The Goodbye needs to be in there regardless
This line is misplaced, is repeated more than once.
So forget about the days. We're almost all the way Forget about the times we were lonely. Now hold me, and you hold me.
Also is sounds like: "Forget about the times we worry...Goodbye" The Goodbye needs to be in there regardless