i made a couple of changes, including the last line and changing it to "trousers seem to love your floor", and "it's bold and dark girl can't you see?", and "blanks and gaps", and "the time rewinds to the end of May"
the suggested fourth line doesn't make sense to me, he definitely says "we"
anyway, love this song, some good wailing in it :) amazed there's no other comments!!
i made a couple of changes, including the last line and changing it to "trousers seem to love your floor", and "it's bold and dark girl can't you see?", and "blanks and gaps", and "the time rewinds to the end of May"
the suggested fourth line doesn't make sense to me, he definitely says "we"
anyway, love this song, some good wailing in it :) amazed there's no other comments!!