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Some corrections:
"Impressions of struggle were all I gained" "Impressions of struggle were all I gave"
"And Grandpa's clothes and shelves" "And Grandpa's closet shelves"
"??" "I invent and retrace and unfold"
"When you clutch at the glistener drink" "When you clutch at the bliss in a dream"
"I circle the reasons" "I search for the reasons"
Some corrections:
"Impressions of struggle were all I gained" "Impressions of struggle were all I gave"
"And Grandpa's clothes and shelves" "And Grandpa's closet shelves"
"??" "I invent and retrace and unfold"
"When you clutch at the glistener drink" "When you clutch at the bliss in a dream"
"I circle the reasons" "I search for the reasons"