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I'd suggest these changes-
"Bear behind the case" becomes "barely had a case" "Keep score, even playing fields is game" becomes "keep score, even playing fields, this game, I know when all said we're the same".
Thanks, I've submitted the corrections.
Now we only need the forth sentence of the first verse...
I'd suggest these changes-
"Bear behind the case" becomes "barely had a case" "Keep score, even playing fields is game" becomes "keep score, even playing fields, this game, I know when all said we're the same".
Thanks, I've submitted the corrections.
Thanks, I've submitted the corrections.
Now we only need the forth sentence of the first verse...
Now we only need the forth sentence of the first verse...