The 9th and 10th line are incorrect. It should read:
"Sweet collide as the lights go out
Someone else she thinks about"
If you look at it, the line "As we collide as the lights go out" is awkward and doesn't make sense. You'd either say "As we collide the lights go out" or "We collide as the lights go out".
The 9th and 10th line are incorrect. It should read:
"Sweet collide as the lights go out Someone else she thinks about"
If you look at it, the line "As we collide as the lights go out" is awkward and doesn't make sense. You'd either say "As we collide the lights go out" or "We collide as the lights go out".