Although this song is really hard to understand (and totally awesome!), I think I might be able to suggest some edits for these lyrics:
Stanza I
Fear begin to turn aright [instead of around: it sounds more like what is sung, and also rhymes with "fight" two lines later]
Stanza II
In your heart someone said [instead of "someone's there"]
Stanza III
Why doesn't it move you when you're here alone?
It's like the message is gotten to us all (or got into our soul/gotten to our soul?)
Stanza V
Then I don't suppose
That you watched your ? spring grow [not sure on this one by any stretch]
They would never know.
Anyway, that's my attempt. Regardless, if I ever meet Norman Blake, the first thing I'm doing is asking him what the lyrics to this song are. It's too good to remain a mystery!
Although this song is really hard to understand (and totally awesome!), I think I might be able to suggest some edits for these lyrics:
Stanza I Fear begin to turn aright [instead of around: it sounds more like what is sung, and also rhymes with "fight" two lines later]
Stanza II In your heart someone said [instead of "someone's there"]
Stanza III Why doesn't it move you when you're here alone? It's like the message is gotten to us all (or got into our soul/gotten to our soul?)
Stanza V Then I don't suppose That you watched your ? spring grow [not sure on this one by any stretch] They would never know.
Anyway, that's my attempt. Regardless, if I ever meet Norman Blake, the first thing I'm doing is asking him what the lyrics to this song are. It's too good to remain a mystery!