Some corrections, it's not "They're all from the picket ice", it's "Billow from her vacant eyes". Also I'm pretty sure it's "melting" not "melted". And it's "Concealed tight", not "Consumer tide". And sorry, but I can't help you with the stuff in brackets, there seem to be two voices, and I think one's just going "Lalalala" while the other is actually singing words, so it's very confusing, and I'm not sure it's "Strokes" it might be "Stroll" or something else, and I don't think "See the strange fires" is the first line of the final chorus, I think it's the same as the first and he's saying something else at the end of the previous verse that sound like "See", which maybe it is. Almost forgot, I think it's "Fate" not "Flame", but you're probably right on that one.
Some corrections, it's not "They're all from the picket ice", it's "Billow from her vacant eyes". Also I'm pretty sure it's "melting" not "melted". And it's "Concealed tight", not "Consumer tide". And sorry, but I can't help you with the stuff in brackets, there seem to be two voices, and I think one's just going "Lalalala" while the other is actually singing words, so it's very confusing, and I'm not sure it's "Strokes" it might be "Stroll" or something else, and I don't think "See the strange fires" is the first line of the final chorus, I think it's the same as the first and he's saying something else at the end of the previous verse that sound like "See", which maybe it is. Almost forgot, I think it's "Fate" not "Flame", but you're probably right on that one.