You did a good job with these lyrics, Kashika. I tried, but ultimately had too many parts I wasn't sure about...
There's one line you posted that I'd change - I think it goes, "This is where robbers meet to go through my window," but, I could be wrong.
Also I've gone back and forth about the first line a lot. "Some may say" or "'Son,' they say"... ???
This song reminds me of the city I grew up in and the river that cuts it down the middle. I could hear the bridges going up and the cargo ships passing by from my bedroom window at night.
Thanks and yes "This is where robbers meet to go through my window" makes more sense :) I think it might be "Son, they say" as well. Thanks for the help!
Thanks and yes "This is where robbers meet to go through my window" makes more sense :) I think it might be "Son, they say" as well. Thanks for the help!
You did a good job with these lyrics, Kashika. I tried, but ultimately had too many parts I wasn't sure about...
There's one line you posted that I'd change - I think it goes, "This is where robbers meet to go through my window," but, I could be wrong.
Also I've gone back and forth about the first line a lot. "Some may say" or "'Son,' they say"... ???
This song reminds me of the city I grew up in and the river that cuts it down the middle. I could hear the bridges going up and the cargo ships passing by from my bedroom window at night.
Thanks and yes "This is where robbers meet to go through my window" makes more sense :) I think it might be "Son, they say" as well. Thanks for the help!
Thanks and yes "This is where robbers meet to go through my window" makes more sense :) I think it might be "Son, they say" as well. Thanks for the help!