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there's plenty i'm uncertain of here, but beginning where you have "This starving go against," i hear "These starving organs hem and haw"
I fixed that and a few other things. I can't tell if it's "are dust" or "own dust", either.
there's plenty i'm uncertain of here, but beginning where you have "This starving go against," i hear "These starving organs hem and haw"
I fixed that and a few other things. I can't tell if it's "are dust" or "own dust", either.
I fixed that and a few other things. I can't tell if it's "are dust" or "own dust", either.