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it seems mostly right, although the second to last line is "heart unfolding like flowers before me." well done! i'm impressed by the "one side me, one side always you" bit.
thanks, hab204. corrected. ;)
it seems mostly right, although the second to last line is "heart unfolding like flowers before me." well done! i'm impressed by the "one side me, one side always you" bit.
thanks, hab204. corrected. ;)
thanks, hab204. corrected. ;)