Lyric discussion by iggy72 

Cover art for Pancho & Lefty lyrics by Townes Van Zandt

This has to be one of the most perfect songs ever written. It tells a beautiful, complete story, without one spare word to it.

That said, I've always been intrigued by the first stanza. It seems unrelated to the "plot" that makes up the rest of the song, but somehow the song wouldn't be complete without it. Just on its own, it's an amazing piece of poetry. I like how it sends up all the myths about the freedom and virtue of "living on the road" that were so common in the 60s and 70s. He's talking to all the innocent romantics who went out to live that life, which was never more than a dream, who they could drop out of society and live "free and clean" on the road forever. In reality, all it did was turn them into cold, tough, hard men, and break their mothers' hearts.

Like I say, I love that first stanza, but I can't figure out how it relates to the rest of the song. Maybe Lefty started out as one like them, dreaming of a romantic bandit's life. Then, after circumstances got out of control and he betrayed Poncho, he lost his faith in himself and his own goodness, and now he looks in the mirror and sees himself as the "bad guy" with the skin like iron, breath like kerosene. So I guess the whole thing could be about good intentions gone wrong, the dangers of letting dreams and romance influence your decisions.

@iggy72 To me, the first verse connects to the rest of the song in the sense that it’s about expectations and/or dreams and, also, myths. Whether or not the person spoken of in the first verse is actually Lefty, the idea that living on the road was gonna keep him “free & clean” - two key words within the context of the song - or shield him from the ugliness of life, is mere folly. Lefty teamed up with Pancho, and they felt “free & clean” for a while. Until the “honest world” caught up with (nothing free or clean...

@iggy72 To me, the first verse connects to the rest of the song in the sense that it’s about expectations and/or dreams and, also, myths. Whether or not the person spoken of in the first verse is actually Lefty, the idea that living on the road was gonna keep him “free & clean” - two key words within the context of the song - or shield him from the ugliness of life, is mere folly. Lefty teamed up with Pancho, and they felt “free & clean” for a while. Until the “honest world” caught up with (nothing free or clean...

If you’re going to read one of these posts, read the one farther down the page, it’s got an extra couple sentences, I didn’t expect it to post both full posts, thought I was continuing my thought…