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Pretty sure these lines are incorrect:
Line 6 should be "graft my heart upon the vine"
Line 9 should be "for to wake my lady on the water"
Line 13 should be "whip this wind into a flame"
Line 17 should be "oh, to make it rain"
Line 20 should be "weave a song no one has sung"
Line 29: "through countless deserts, dreams, and jests"
Pretty sure these lines are incorrect:
Line 6 should be "graft my heart upon the vine"
Line 9 should be "for to wake my lady on the water"
Line 13 should be "whip this wind into a flame"
Line 17 should be "oh, to make it rain"
Line 20 should be "weave a song no one has sung"
Line 29: "through countless deserts, dreams, and jests"