"And take my family far From me to reach" is "and take my family out from under me." Or, if that second one isn't correct, it still isn't the first. "telling everyone on thats in war" is "telling everybody you're their savior." Also, there should be a "(this time)" in the second chorus, and the second chorus also repeats once. "SO GIVE ME THE REASON TO BELIEVE YOU" should be "SO GIVE ME THE REASON TO BELIEVE YOU [paragraph] YOU." Also, the capital letters are somewhat annoying. Finally, there shouldn't be a "(lives)" at the end.
"And take my family far From me to reach" is "and take my family out from under me." Or, if that second one isn't correct, it still isn't the first. "telling everyone on thats in war" is "telling everybody you're their savior." Also, there should be a "(this time)" in the second chorus, and the second chorus also repeats once. "SO GIVE ME THE REASON TO BELIEVE YOU" should be "SO GIVE ME THE REASON TO BELIEVE YOU [paragraph] YOU." Also, the capital letters are somewhat annoying. Finally, there shouldn't be a "(lives)" at the end.