there are quite a few thing that sound a little off, but i'm not certain about it all, so i'm just going to give some suggestions in caps where i can.
Even a day can
PASS just as quickly
And I don't mind, I don't mind
If they AIN'T as they should be
DEEP/KEEP open eyes are(?)
TWO private oceans
They don't cry
I don't mind to see DEVOTION
Little marriage
BLEW through this HOME
The difference between us
AND have and hold
WHAT IS a sparrow
A bird in home
This is THE answer
The question's his soul/THAT QUESTIONS US ALL(?)
I GOT CAUGHT IN THE BIG THRILL
I can't see you tonight
I don't mind
But do you?
I don't mind what you say
If you don't MIND WHERE I'M GOING
DEVOTION IS KNOWN
And NOT FOR SHOWING
Something SMALLER
Keeps us in tow/TWO (?)
The difference between us
AND have and hold
I started minding
Not having IT ALL
ONE little marriage is
Big now
there are quite a few thing that sound a little off, but i'm not certain about it all, so i'm just going to give some suggestions in caps where i can.
Even a day can PASS just as quickly And I don't mind, I don't mind If they AIN'T as they should be
DEEP/KEEP open eyes are(?) TWO private oceans They don't cry I don't mind to see DEVOTION
Little marriage BLEW through this HOME The difference between us AND have and hold WHAT IS a sparrow A bird in home This is THE answer The question's his soul/THAT QUESTIONS US ALL(?)
I GOT CAUGHT IN THE BIG THRILL I can't see you tonight I don't mind But do you? I don't mind what you say If you don't MIND WHERE I'M GOING DEVOTION IS KNOWN And NOT FOR SHOWING
Something SMALLER Keeps us in tow/TWO (?) The difference between us AND have and hold I started minding Not having IT ALL ONE little marriage is Big now