"But we woke up in to that right now, Had to choose my battles" should be "we wont go into that fight now, I have to choose my battles"
"I think you'd kill me if you told me I'm great" should be "Think it'd kill you if you told me I'm great?"
"Nothing's outside when it's waiting there for you" should be "Nothing's outside and he's waiting for there you"
"Clean your room and you clean your plate, I want you" should be "I've cleaned your room and you've cleaned your plate, right on cue" or even "we're on cue" but "I want you" is definitely not it.
"But we woke up in to that right now, Had to choose my battles" should be "we wont go into that fight now, I have to choose my battles"
"I think you'd kill me if you told me I'm great" should be "Think it'd kill you if you told me I'm great?"
"Nothing's outside when it's waiting there for you" should be "Nothing's outside and he's waiting for there you"
"Clean your room and you clean your plate, I want you" should be "I've cleaned your room and you've cleaned your plate, right on cue" or even "we're on cue" but "I want you" is definitely not it.
good job otherwise.