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"you push off with the ground" should be "you cross your arms with a frown" "you got your needle sharpened and I know just whats in store" and some of the "do"s should be "did"s but other than that great job!
"you push off with the ground" should be "you cross your arms with a frown" "you got your needle sharpened and I know just whats in store" and some of the "do"s should be "did"s but other than that great job!