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a few thoughts:
"I'll ride you back the arc" might be "I'll ride him by the arc" or "arriving by the arc" "because you might" i think it should be "because you're mine" (when you listen very closely) "as deep as a page" should probably be "empty as a page"
a few thoughts:
"I'll ride you back the arc" might be "I'll ride him by the arc" or "arriving by the arc" "because you might" i think it should be "because you're mine" (when you listen very closely) "as deep as a page" should probably be "empty as a page"