People, Running

"We are just like oceans flooding the ground in search of water"

I believe should be:

"We are just like old ships running aground in search of water"

And

"People living of the edge of no come in search of water People standing there watching people run in search of water Just watching people run"

I believe should be:

"I think we're learning that the answers never come in search of water I think I'll stay in here to watch the people run in search of water"