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Good job. Just some minor adjustments
running off the rails I'll sail you through the roadways of your brain
If I could bring a light to shine upon the dark and disobey The night so young but I still say we're too old for cliches
Oh I can only dream of the dreams we'd have, how our hearts would be entwined
I'd still be myself beneath the banks unbroken beside the stream
Good job. Just some minor adjustments
running off the rails I'll sail you through the roadways of your brain
If I could bring a light to shine upon the dark and disobey The night so young but I still say we're too old for cliches
Oh I can only dream of the dreams we'd have, how our hearts would be entwined
I'd still be myself beneath the banks unbroken beside the stream