"Let it seep through your sockets and earholes
into your precious, fractured skull
Let it seep, let it keep you from us
They should heal you
They should be unreal, you"
Are you sure it's not:
"Let it seep through your sockets and earholes
into your precious, fractured skull
Let it seep, let it keep you from us
Patiently heal you
Patiently unreel you"?
Now, I don't completely agree with 'fractured'. Though, I can't pose an alternative as I hear 'fractured', 'ruptured', and some mix of the two when I listen intently.
As for the chorus sections, I'd like to see your original text as I agree that there are far too many 's' sounds for it to be what I see now. I agree with bdaily and lordpie because I hear:
"Bead-weighted chests with lofticries
Lofticries with trembling thighs
Weepy chests with weepy sighs
Weepy skin with trembling thighs"
and
"Dear brother, collect all the liquids off of the floor"
This song feels so intensely sexual to me and hearing the lyrics this way reinforces that feeling so well.
The lines from 2:00 to 2:17:
"Let it seep through your sockets and earholes into your precious, fractured skull Let it seep, let it keep you from us They should heal you They should be unreal, you"
Are you sure it's not:
"Let it seep through your sockets and earholes into your precious, fractured skull Let it seep, let it keep you from us Patiently heal you Patiently unreel you"?
Now, I don't completely agree with 'fractured'. Though, I can't pose an alternative as I hear 'fractured', 'ruptured', and some mix of the two when I listen intently.
As for the chorus sections, I'd like to see your original text as I agree that there are far too many 's' sounds for it to be what I see now. I agree with bdaily and lordpie because I hear:
"Bead-weighted chests with lofticries Lofticries with trembling thighs Weepy chests with weepy sighs Weepy skin with trembling thighs"
and
"Dear brother, collect all the liquids off of the floor"
This song feels so intensely sexual to me and hearing the lyrics this way reinforces that feeling so well.
ahh, your lyrics do sound more correct and appropriate for the set as a whole. Thanks :)
ahh, your lyrics do sound more correct and appropriate for the set as a whole. Thanks :)
No problem. Glad to help. :)
No problem. Glad to help. :)