very similar to yours... think just a few little things:
into the desert
weather forever
desperate clouds
billowing out
seeing the future
cautiously answer
it's only the plains
sideways rain
the days whispered and shouted
and everything counted
the signs were around
we looked so we found
in seeking a pattern
none of it mattered
watching the sky
cycling by
through the windows of a past life
we are seeing the same thing
but they are not laughing
the smoke from the engine
the bones of a plane
and i notice this vaguely
but it couldn't contain me
and so i've been tamed
and so it remains
and i am ashamed
and hiding in a stranger's body
try to remember
pen to the paper
pushing it out
what's it about
the pictures are empty
voices have left me
it's only the plains
sideways rain
and i am ashamed
and i am ashamed
and every day is just the same
very similar to yours... think just a few little things:
into the desert weather forever desperate clouds billowing out seeing the future cautiously answer it's only the plains sideways rain
the days whispered and shouted and everything counted the signs were around we looked so we found in seeking a pattern none of it mattered watching the sky cycling by through the windows of a past life
we are seeing the same thing but they are not laughing the smoke from the engine the bones of a plane and i notice this vaguely but it couldn't contain me and so i've been tamed and so it remains and i am ashamed and hiding in a stranger's body
try to remember pen to the paper pushing it out what's it about the pictures are empty voices have left me it's only the plains sideways rain and i am ashamed and i am ashamed and every day is just the same
thank you!
thank you!
i updated above.
i updated above.
i like all of your changes except "hiding in a stranger's body", i still think it's "hiding in a/the strangest pathway".
i like all of your changes except "hiding in a stranger's body", i still think it's "hiding in a/the strangest pathway".