Pretty good attempt, especially with some of the nonsense lines. However, the place/street names are mostly wrong. Changes are marked with an asterisk:
Smoke, scent scent, smoke smoke (I want to say he might also be singing "smoke set" for some of the lines, but either one seems possible)
(x12)
Who's king, pumps up the fat hat
Juicing [could also be "Jews sing", as there are a lot of Jews in Brooklyn, and a major center for orthodox and Hasidic Jewish culture]
thumps up the fat cat
Joe Six stump up, the ratatat
BANG! You live with Josie and the Pussycats
The Brooklynites
(x4)
Yo!
Change here for the 2, the 3, the 4, the 5, the A, the C, the E, the B, D, F, the N, the R, the Queens-bound G
[These are all subway lines, all of which converge in or near Downtown Brooklyn, except curiously for the E, which ran through Brooklyn until the 1970s, though it does connect with the A/C at the World Trade Center. The "V" in your original was indeed a line, but it never crossed into Brooklyn. In addition, this song is from the soundtrack to the movie "Blue in the Face", a sequel to "Smoke", both of which were set in Brooklyn and came out in 1995. The V train did not exist until 2001, and was eliminated in 2010.]
Won't you please stand clear of the closing doors? (x2)
Six hoodlums, dicey, their faces apostrophed with headphones
Surround you on the corner of Baltic and Smith [**through the mid 90s, the corner of Baltic and Smith could definitely be considered a dicey area with hoodlums]
And disperse in six directions
Like electrons used to stream off from the apple of the atom
Down on Empire Blvd.
On Fulton and South Oxford
Down on the Flatbush Extension
Down under the Manhattan Bridge Overpass
South 3rd St
Avenue U
Atlantic and Alice [This is probably the most obscure location in the song. I can't remember whether Alice Ct is mentioned in the movie.]
DeKalb, yeah
Hoyt-Schemerorn
Pacific
St. Felix
*Jay Street
Borough Hall
The Brooklynites
This train is being held by the dispatcher
[The last part, Jay Street-Borough Hall, mimics the way the subway conductors often embellished the name of that Downtown Brooklyn stop. However, as of 2011, the stop is now mostly referred to as Jay Street-MetroTech because of a connection re-route. Times change.]
Pretty good attempt, especially with some of the nonsense lines. However, the place/street names are mostly wrong. Changes are marked with an asterisk:
Smoke, scent scent, smoke smoke (I want to say he might also be singing "smoke set" for some of the lines, but either one seems possible) (x12)
Who's king, pumps up the fat hat Juicing [could also be "Jews sing", as there are a lot of Jews in Brooklyn, and a major center for orthodox and Hasidic Jewish culture] thumps up the fat cat Joe Six stump up, the ratatat BANG! You live with Josie and the Pussycats
The Brooklynites (x4)
Yo!
Change here for the 2, the 3, the 4, the 5, the A, the C, the E, the B, D, F, the N, the R, the Queens-bound G
[These are all subway lines, all of which converge in or near Downtown Brooklyn, except curiously for the E, which ran through Brooklyn until the 1970s, though it does connect with the A/C at the World Trade Center. The "V" in your original was indeed a line, but it never crossed into Brooklyn. In addition, this song is from the soundtrack to the movie "Blue in the Face", a sequel to "Smoke", both of which were set in Brooklyn and came out in 1995. The V train did not exist until 2001, and was eliminated in 2010.]
Won't you please stand clear of the closing doors? (x2)
Smoke scent scent smoke smoke (x4)
The Brooklynites (x4)
Well!
Smoke smoke smoke smoke smoke smoke scent! (continuing throughout)
Yeah, Come on, come on, yeah, come on!
Six hoodlums, dicey, their faces apostrophed with headphones Surround you on the corner of Baltic and Smith [**through the mid 90s, the corner of Baltic and Smith could definitely be considered a dicey area with hoodlums] And disperse in six directions Like electrons used to stream off from the apple of the atom
Down on Empire Blvd. On Fulton and South Oxford Down on the Flatbush Extension Down under the Manhattan Bridge Overpass South 3rd St Avenue U Atlantic and Alice [This is probably the most obscure location in the song. I can't remember whether Alice Ct is mentioned in the movie.] DeKalb, yeah Hoyt-Schemerorn Pacific St. Felix *Jay Street Borough Hall
The Brooklynites
This train is being held by the dispatcher
[The last part, Jay Street-Borough Hall, mimics the way the subway conductors often embellished the name of that Downtown Brooklyn stop. However, as of 2011, the stop is now mostly referred to as Jay Street-MetroTech because of a connection re-route. Times change.]