instead of "His trials pessimist, but he's no less content. When the world rolls in the grip of his hands" it is "He's triumph's pessimist, but he's no less content. With the world in the grip of his hands".
instead of "Say we can warn him to help you" it is "Say we don't want him to have it all".
the first "pawns" in the next line should be "puppets".
that's all that i can find, besides a couple of the to's needing to be too's.
there are a couple of corrections with this.
instead of "His trials pessimist, but he's no less content. When the world rolls in the grip of his hands" it is "He's triumph's pessimist, but he's no less content. With the world in the grip of his hands".
instead of "Say we can warn him to help you" it is "Say we don't want him to have it all".
the first "pawns" in the next line should be "puppets".
that's all that i can find, besides a couple of the to's needing to be too's.