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Here's what I think I hear, see if you agree:
"They decided to give into the [enemy], [] succumb to their ways" (remove the "to")
"If they'd stuck around [] lives would have been saved." (remove "their")
Think that's it, thanks!
Here's what I think I hear, see if you agree:
"They decided to give into the [enemy], [] succumb to their ways" (remove the "to")
"If they'd stuck around [] lives would have been saved." (remove "their")
Think that's it, thanks!