Comment Reposted to your Profile Page.
Just some minor corrections
"It haunts me, haunts me"
Should be "It holds me, holds me"
"Even I could go to heaven, If I'm part deceased"
To "Even I could go to heaven, If I part the sea(s)"
"That's when we laid down the end of the road, We all seem to walk and I guess walking alone"
To "That's when we laid down, end of the road, We all seem to walk, guess I walked it alone"
"Whats life inside a bottle if it's cold?
To "What's life inside a bottle if it's gone?"
I may be wrong, but that's just my two cents.
Oops, my bad.
"That's when we laid down the end of the road We all seem to walk and I guess walking alone"
To "That's when laid down, end of the road We all seem to walk it, guess I walked it alone"
That sounds better now.
i think it's still haunts me, not holds me. but yeah, part the sea. yeah.
Just some minor corrections
"It haunts me, haunts me"
Should be "It holds me, holds me"
"Even I could go to heaven, If I'm part deceased"
To "Even I could go to heaven, If I part the sea(s)"
"That's when we laid down the end of the road, We all seem to walk and I guess walking alone"
To "That's when we laid down, end of the road, We all seem to walk, guess I walked it alone"
"Whats life inside a bottle if it's cold?
To "What's life inside a bottle if it's gone?"
I may be wrong, but that's just my two cents.
Oops, my bad.
Oops, my bad.
"That's when we laid down the end of the road We all seem to walk and I guess walking alone"
"That's when we laid down the end of the road We all seem to walk and I guess walking alone"
To "That's when laid down, end of the road We all seem to walk it, guess I walked it alone"
To "That's when laid down, end of the road We all seem to walk it, guess I walked it alone"
That sounds better now.
That sounds better now.
i think it's still haunts me, not holds me. but yeah, part the sea. yeah.
i think it's still haunts me, not holds me. but yeah, part the sea. yeah.