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"stop once you beseech him" should be "Start once you to besiege him"
"twice hardly believes it" sounds more like "twice, hard, he believes it"
"God's forgot some pain" should be "God's forgotten pain"
amazing that he wrote and sang this at 20
"stop once you beseech him" should be "Start once you to besiege him"
"twice hardly believes it" sounds more like "twice, hard, he believes it"
"God's forgot some pain" should be "God's forgotten pain"
amazing that he wrote and sang this at 20