i think the "and i've watched them all move through you / yeah, i've watched them all let you down" part is annoying. i don't mind that it's a key change, and i actually kinda like that it's grainy, almost like he found an old recording of a really bad song and he used a pinch of it to add some dimension to this one. but the lyrics of it and the timing are both just awkward and weird. they don't rhyme, nor are they particularly profound, or presenting an interesting idea or metaphor. they just... are. it's like he was trying to do improv and that was the best he could come up with. i wouldn't even mind the lack or lyrical depth or rhyming scheme if just the rhythm wasn't so awkward.
the song on the whole is good and catchy, but that part just is odd. i wouldn't say out of place, because i think the IDEA is cool. but the way he executes it is just lazy. unless there's some part of the story i don't know. but in that case, to the layperson, it's gonna come across as lazy and awkward. oh well.
i think the "and i've watched them all move through you / yeah, i've watched them all let you down" part is annoying. i don't mind that it's a key change, and i actually kinda like that it's grainy, almost like he found an old recording of a really bad song and he used a pinch of it to add some dimension to this one. but the lyrics of it and the timing are both just awkward and weird. they don't rhyme, nor are they particularly profound, or presenting an interesting idea or metaphor. they just... are. it's like he was trying to do improv and that was the best he could come up with. i wouldn't even mind the lack or lyrical depth or rhyming scheme if just the rhythm wasn't so awkward.
the song on the whole is good and catchy, but that part just is odd. i wouldn't say out of place, because i think the IDEA is cool. but the way he executes it is just lazy. unless there's some part of the story i don't know. but in that case, to the layperson, it's gonna come across as lazy and awkward. oh well.