corrections:
world wide came > aware of why i came
in his youth had offered full kai > my father in his youth set off with a kite and a liter of wine, mad to determine the height of the sky, and the breadth of one human life
excited > nearsighted
kept in the cold > camped in the cold
comment/moment switch
corrections: world wide came > aware of why i came in his youth had offered full kai > my father in his youth set off with a kite and a liter of wine, mad to determine the height of the sky, and the breadth of one human life excited > nearsighted kept in the cold > camped in the cold comment/moment switch