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Yo... nice job mate... few things however.
In the second verse.. you have "she's a soft seatmate," when he says "she's a saucy dame." And in the third verse where it's "It's Marjorie Day," he says "it's laundry day." referenced in the following line "and my stockings stink."
Otherwise... flawless..
Yo... nice job mate... few things however.
In the second verse.. you have "she's a soft seatmate," when he says "she's a saucy dame." And in the third verse where it's "It's Marjorie Day," he says "it's laundry day." referenced in the following line "and my stockings stink."
Otherwise... flawless..