In Charlie Scene's verse (the first verse), you wrote "Someone who's to die, Instead of watching you cry for help." but he really says "someone whose willing to die, just to watch you crying for help"
also i noticed at the end of his verse you put "I got to pick up the pieces, I got to bury them deep... And when the dark hits the coffin - Just go to sleep." but its really "I gotta pick up the pieces, I gotta bury 'em deep, and when you look in my eyes, I'll be the last thing you see!"
In J3T's verse, (second verse) you put "Hurt turned into blood, and the blood keeps on pouring, From every pour I wipe it up, this is just to be demoted.
Now someone started dying, my only opponent? 'Cause I will watch my baby cry, So I keep on just going. Am I a man or a beast, or father nature at least, watch humanity cease, Cause it's our human disease. You got to kill what you gotta kill, Yeah that's what they say. And I can go against God's will, You better pray."
But im pretty sure its "Now someones gotta dye, and im my only opponent? 'Cause I won't watch my baby cry, So I keep on just going. Am I a man or a beast, its mother nature at least, watch humanity cease, Cause it's our human disease. You gotta kill when you gotta kill, Yeah that's what they say. And I cant go against God's will, You better pray."
In Charlie Scene's verse (the first verse), you wrote "Someone who's to die, Instead of watching you cry for help." but he really says "someone whose willing to die, just to watch you crying for help" also i noticed at the end of his verse you put "I got to pick up the pieces, I got to bury them deep... And when the dark hits the coffin - Just go to sleep." but its really "I gotta pick up the pieces, I gotta bury 'em deep, and when you look in my eyes, I'll be the last thing you see!"
In J3T's verse, (second verse) you put "Hurt turned into blood, and the blood keeps on pouring, From every pour I wipe it up, this is just to be demoted.
Now someone started dying, my only opponent? 'Cause I will watch my baby cry, So I keep on just going. Am I a man or a beast, or father nature at least, watch humanity cease, Cause it's our human disease. You got to kill what you gotta kill, Yeah that's what they say. And I can go against God's will, You better pray."
But im pretty sure its "Now someones gotta dye, and im my only opponent? 'Cause I won't watch my baby cry, So I keep on just going. Am I a man or a beast, its mother nature at least, watch humanity cease, Cause it's our human disease. You gotta kill when you gotta kill, Yeah that's what they say. And I cant go against God's will, You better pray."
yea your right please fix these vane
yea your right please fix these vane