In Charlie Scene's verse (the first verse), you wrote "Someone who's to die, Instead of watching you cry for help." but he really says "someone whose willing to die, just to watch you crying for help" also i noticed at the end of his verse you put "I got to pick up the pieces, I got to bury them deep... And when the dark hits the coffin - Just go to sleep." but its really "I gotta pick up the pieces, I gotta bury 'em deep, and when you look in my eyes, I'll be the last thing you see!"
In Charlie Scene's verse (the first verse), you wrote "Someone who's to die, Instead of watching you cry for help." but he really says "someone whose willing to die, just to watch you crying for help" also i noticed at the end of his verse you put "I got to pick up the pieces, I got to bury them deep... And when the dark hits the coffin - Just go to sleep." but its really "I gotta pick up the pieces, I gotta bury 'em deep, and when you look in my eyes, I'll be the last thing you see!"