The Shrine/An Argument

Line 4: the second "they" should be removed

Line 11: "n" should be changed to "in"

Line 15: "become" should be changed to "became"

Line 23: the entire line should be changed to "All diffuse like skin abuse the sun is half its size"

Line 24: the entire line should be changed to "When you talk you hardly even look in my eyes"

Line 26: the entire line should be changed to "In the doorway holding every letter that I wrote"

Line 39 (last line): "in the sea" should be changed to "Innisfree"

:)