At the end of your third verse, I think it should be
Now he woke to what he'd made
Yeah he'd been saving, he'd been saving
So much to have but nothing gained
all boarded up now in his grave
Also, in your fourth verse I think it should be
Do you intend to hold your affection til you die
I know why you wait
Not until your dry
Do you intend to feign your infection
Cause the tide's telling you to wait
Not until your time
At the end of your third verse, I think it should be
Now he woke to what he'd made Yeah he'd been saving, he'd been saving So much to have but nothing gained all boarded up now in his grave
Also, in your fourth verse I think it should be
Do you intend to hold your affection til you die I know why you wait Not until your dry Do you intend to feign your infection Cause the tide's telling you to wait Not until your time