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Here are a few corrections I hear when I listen. I'm not 100% on all of them though:
"That won't hate this melodies words (<--?) That finally make it work" should be: "That won't hate this melody Words that finally make it work"
"And I've wasted a good heaven on you" should be: "And I've wasted a good hair day on you"
"I'm still awake to fight routine" should be: "I'm still awake at 5:13"
"I've finally dug myself too deep" should be: "I've failed and dug myself too deep"
"I stressed(?)as far as I can spit now" should be: "I trust far as I can spit now"
Here are a few corrections I hear when I listen. I'm not 100% on all of them though:
"That won't hate this melodies words (<--?) That finally make it work" should be: "That won't hate this melody Words that finally make it work"
"And I've wasted a good heaven on you" should be: "And I've wasted a good hair day on you"
"I'm still awake to fight routine" should be: "I'm still awake at 5:13"
"I've finally dug myself too deep" should be: "I've failed and dug myself too deep"
"I stressed(?)as far as I can spit now" should be: "I trust far as I can spit now"