LOVE THIS SONG, MAN I'M STOKED FOR UWHF. This song is about the reality of God, the reality that God will never leave us nor forsake us.
A few things are wrong, but you did a really good job!! (I know from the pdf booklet they are giving out for 24hrs today)
In the first verse he says "you're living in fear that no one will hear you cry. (you missed the "you're)
Another really really really small change is "and everything is gone, but the pain carries on" should be "and everything's gone, but the pain carries on"
At the end of that same verse he says "but I, I am here" repeating the I.
In the next verse, the first line starts with and, being, "and i will be yourhope
Your biggest mistake is in the second line of the verse in which "your whole world's ending" should be "your whole world shatters"
Small mistake is that the last your in that verse should be you're (and also the your, your not alone should be you're)
"look up and see love has a face" doesn't have the word "that"
Last mistake is that "your lost and so afraid" should be "You're lost and so afraid"
Great job overall, don't sweat the mistakes. Good work
Just an fyi, you come off as a jackass. "Your mistake" -- Sorry, but because we don't have access to the lyrics just yet, he did a damn good job listening to the words. And who the fuck cares if he didn't spell some words right? The fact is, he got the lyrics spot on except for the structure of the bridge.
Just an fyi, you come off as a jackass. "Your mistake" -- Sorry, but because we don't have access to the lyrics just yet, he did a damn good job listening to the words. And who the fuck cares if he didn't spell some words right? The fact is, he got the lyrics spot on except for the structure of the bridge.
Pointing out some errors that need to be fixed is one thing, but you took it 10 steps further and just became a grammar nazi. GG.
Pointing out some errors that need to be fixed is one thing, but you took it 10 steps further and just became a grammar nazi. GG.
LOVE THIS SONG, MAN I'M STOKED FOR UWHF. This song is about the reality of God, the reality that God will never leave us nor forsake us. A few things are wrong, but you did a really good job!! (I know from the pdf booklet they are giving out for 24hrs today)
In the first verse he says "you're living in fear that no one will hear you cry. (you missed the "you're)
Another really really really small change is "and everything is gone, but the pain carries on" should be "and everything's gone, but the pain carries on" At the end of that same verse he says "but I, I am here" repeating the I.
In the next verse, the first line starts with and, being, "and i will be yourhope Your biggest mistake is in the second line of the verse in which "your whole world's ending" should be "your whole world shatters" Small mistake is that the last your in that verse should be you're (and also the your, your not alone should be you're) "look up and see love has a face" doesn't have the word "that" Last mistake is that "your lost and so afraid" should be "You're lost and so afraid"
Great job overall, don't sweat the mistakes. Good work
Just an fyi, you come off as a jackass. "Your mistake" -- Sorry, but because we don't have access to the lyrics just yet, he did a damn good job listening to the words. And who the fuck cares if he didn't spell some words right? The fact is, he got the lyrics spot on except for the structure of the bridge.
Just an fyi, you come off as a jackass. "Your mistake" -- Sorry, but because we don't have access to the lyrics just yet, he did a damn good job listening to the words. And who the fuck cares if he didn't spell some words right? The fact is, he got the lyrics spot on except for the structure of the bridge.
Pointing out some errors that need to be fixed is one thing, but you took it 10 steps further and just became a grammar nazi. GG.
Pointing out some errors that need to be fixed is one thing, but you took it 10 steps further and just became a grammar nazi. GG.