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"shape your life" rather than "shave" "First offenders" rather than "Worst offenders" And, as the previous poster noted, "scan them" instead of "skim them"
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"shape your life" rather than "shave" "First offenders" rather than "Worst offenders" And, as the previous poster noted, "scan them" instead of "skim them"