Nice job, translating. Maybe I can help you wih the tough spots...I'm from Germany^^
I want to carry you, I want to love you. (i think)
Then the love stays. (i suppose remains could work too)
Carry is corect, but I think she meant "I will support you" and just used a metaphor. Second line is "Cause the love remained"
Love doesn't become, (?) (perhaps change)
Yes, she sings "Love doesn't become"...perhaps she thought of "Don't try to build something out of it, Love doesn't become anything, it simply is". Though this line is puzzling even in German
And we long the things clearly, (?!)
And if one of us must go,
We are nevertheless always there.
You swallowed a line^^ "We are two, and we are one, and we're seeing things clearly, and if one of us must go, we're still always there" The last line coul either mean "we're still always there for each other" or, more likely "we're still always with each other, in our hearts
I think this song is meant to be confusing...I mean, it's about the one big love, and while the sings as if anything is crystal clear (to them), an outside person might not everything they talk about...
Nice job, translating. Maybe I can help you wih the tough spots...I'm from Germany^^
I want to carry you, I want to love you. (i think) Then the love stays. (i suppose remains could work too)
Carry is corect, but I think she meant "I will support you" and just used a metaphor. Second line is "Cause the love remained"
Love doesn't become, (?) (perhaps change)
Yes, she sings "Love doesn't become"...perhaps she thought of "Don't try to build something out of it, Love doesn't become anything, it simply is". Though this line is puzzling even in German
And we long the things clearly, (?!) And if one of us must go, We are nevertheless always there.
You swallowed a line^^ "We are two, and we are one, and we're seeing things clearly, and if one of us must go, we're still always there" The last line coul either mean "we're still always there for each other" or, more likely "we're still always with each other, in our hearts
I think this song is meant to be confusing...I mean, it's about the one big love, and while the sings as if anything is crystal clear (to them), an outside person might not everything they talk about...