Those lyrics look pretty good to me, rhyserpeacer. I disagree, though, that the samples shouldn't be listed. There are plenty of songs, by the Books and others, that choose to make their statements through a series of edited samples rather than re-writing and re-stating them. The words in the samples may just be incidental--maybe they were only used because they sounded nice--but they can also just as easily be as important to the song as any sung lyrics.
Those lyrics look pretty good to me, rhyserpeacer. I disagree, though, that the samples shouldn't be listed. There are plenty of songs, by the Books and others, that choose to make their statements through a series of edited samples rather than re-writing and re-stating them. The words in the samples may just be incidental--maybe they were only used because they sounded nice--but they can also just as easily be as important to the song as any sung lyrics.