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Second stanza: "factory 'lathe'" Third stanza: "'flower' hall" & "shoulders in 'shawl'" Fourth stanza: "leap the 'weir'" Seventh stanza: "the 'sea salt' eats.."
Second stanza: "factory 'lathe'" Third stanza: "'flower' hall" & "shoulders in 'shawl'" Fourth stanza: "leap the 'weir'" Seventh stanza: "the 'sea salt' eats.."