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hey excellent work. may i suggest a minor change i think theses lines are different from what's above:
"I'm not such older than I was, I'm feeling so much righter now"
should be:
"I'm not such of the man I was, Feeling it so much right and wrong."
I'm hearing "I'm not such all the man I was."
hey excellent work. may i suggest a minor change i think theses lines are different from what's above:
"I'm not such older than I was, I'm feeling so much righter now"
should be:
"I'm not such of the man I was, Feeling it so much right and wrong."
I'm hearing "I'm not such all the man I was."
I'm hearing "I'm not such all the man I was."