These lyric corrections are straight from the album booklet itself:
"I see a warm face with a soft mouth" - not "your warm face with the soft mouth"
"Stand up as they bend, reaching" - there's a comma in between bend and reaching. Not a big correction by any means.
"My Best Theory?" - there is a question mark after this line. This, I think, adds some depth to the meaning of the line.
"It's already in me." - instead of "My best theory is already in me." they're two different sentences. like a question-answer.
"By dowsing find my true design?" - again a question mark at the end, and no comma between "dowsing" and "find"
"My flag?" - a question.
"My appetite?" - another question.
that's it! sorry i just recieved the album in the mail today (a day before it officially comes out, might I add) and i felt like making sure the lyrics were all perfect!
These lyric corrections are straight from the album booklet itself:
"I see a warm face with a soft mouth" - not "your warm face with the soft mouth"
"Stand up as they bend, reaching" - there's a comma in between bend and reaching. Not a big correction by any means.
"My Best Theory?" - there is a question mark after this line. This, I think, adds some depth to the meaning of the line.
"It's already in me." - instead of "My best theory is already in me." they're two different sentences. like a question-answer.
"By dowsing find my true design?" - again a question mark at the end, and no comma between "dowsing" and "find"
"My flag?" - a question.
"My appetite?" - another question.
that's it! sorry i just recieved the album in the mail today (a day before it officially comes out, might I add) and i felt like making sure the lyrics were all perfect!